The sing-songy nature of it really got me watching the words. Nice.

i really liked this one. i liked the whole idea behind it and i especially liked the last stanza "but if you didn't read it all/maybe another day/you'll think about it/as you fall." very nice. though, near the end, the flow was sorta hard to keep up with. but, it didn't detract from the quality too much. good job and KW! Davida

Hm... interesting. I like it. good title too. :)

pickles

I like the idea & the last stanza. The last one didn't seem to be quite equally weighted though.

I love this poem. It one of those, "just when u thought u were safe..." Bravo. This is beautifully written!

Great job. Well written and I like the rhyming in it.

Oh! I like this! The way it switches to italics was good. Thanks for the reviews!

That was wonderful. I love the scheme. The fragments work well for you.

its pretty powerful also, except this is one of my favs

This reminds me a lot of a guy I know. Well, and something I went through. It was REALLY good. You're a great poet :).

o... i love it

p.s. thanks again for the reviews and thanks for putting me on your favorite authors list!(i'd put you on mine but it's full and i'm lazy) keep writing!

i like it...so much energy in every word...well done with expressing so much...great! lots of love AllyCred

Beautiful poem as always. You have a flair for this kind of stuff, your an impressive writer. Both in style and in skill. Keep it up -

Wow. Love the rhyming scheme. It adds to the emotion of the poem. That was amazing. Love it.

WOW i love it! very good! :) keep writting