The sing-songy nature of it really got me watching the words. Nice.

i really liked this one. i liked the whole idea behind it and i especially liked the last stanza "but if you didn't read it all/maybe another day/you'll think about it/as you fall." very nice. though, near the end, the flow was sorta hard to keep up with. but, it didn't detract from the quality too much. good job and KW! ~Davida

Hm... interesting. I like it. good title too. :)

~pickles

I like the idea & the last stanza. The last one didn't seem to be quite equally weighted though.

I love this poem. It one of those, "just when u thought u were safe..." Bravo. This is beautifully written!

Great job. Well written and I like the rhyming in it.

Oh! I like this! The way it switches to italics was good. Thanks for the reviews!

That was wonderful. I love the scheme. The fragments work well for you.

its pretty powerful also, except this is one of my favs

This reminds me a lot of a guy I know. Well, and something I went through. It was REALLY good. You're a great poet :).

o... i love it

p.s. thanks again for the reviews and thanks for putting me on your favorite authors list!(i'd put you on mine but it's full and i'm lazy) keep writing!

i like it...so much energy in every word...well done with expressing so much...great! lots of love ~AllyCred~

Beautiful poem as always. You have a flair for this kind of stuff, your an impressive writer. Both in style and in skill. Keep it up -

Wow. Love the rhyming scheme. It adds to the emotion of the poem. That was amazing. Love it.

WOW i love it! very good! :) keep writting