|Reviews for attention grabber|
| Pinkliquor chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
The sing-songy nature of it really got me watching the words. Nice.
| Eloquent-Marionette chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
i really liked this one. i liked the whole idea behind it and i especially liked the last stanza "but if you didn't read it all/maybe another day/you'll think about it/as you fall." very nice. though, near the end, the flow was sorta hard to keep up with. but, it didn't detract from the quality too much. good job and KW! ~Davida
| kayttea chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
Hm... interesting. I like it. good title too. :)
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
I like the idea & the last stanza. The last one didn't seem to be quite equally weighted though.
| The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
I love this poem. It one of those, "just when u thought u were safe..." Bravo. This is beautifully written!
| LilacShadow chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
Great job. Well written and I like the rhyming in it.
| darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
Oh! I like this! The way it switches to italics was good. Thanks for the reviews!
| Faithiny chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
That was wonderful. I love the scheme. The fragments work well for you.
| loster chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
its pretty powerful also, except this is one of my favs
| Aleara Conlin chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
This reminds me a lot of a guy I know. Well, and something I went through. It was REALLY good. You're a great poet :).
| Rozlin chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
o... i love it
p.s. thanks again for the reviews and thanks for putting me on your favorite authors list!(i'd put you on mine but it's full and i'm lazy) keep writing!
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
i like it...so much energy in every word...well done with expressing so much...great! lots of love ~AllyCred~
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
Beautiful poem as always. You have a flair for this kind of stuff, your an impressive writer. Both in style and in skill. Keep it up -
| Room Without A Door chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Wow. Love the rhyming scheme. It adds to the emotion of the poem. That was amazing. Love it.
| I can't believe it's over chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
WOW i love it! very good! :) keep writting