Reviews for This Mask
LoudNLoverly chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
I think this is one of my favorite poems of this entire site. Although its short, is says plenty. So true that there is no hiding...

I adore your writing!

/Addy/
Saeger chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Anohter, and it's too true... But great job.
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
i can relate to this through and through. people wear this blissful masks but the public can artfully see through them. very effective poem. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. thanks also for the review of "letting go".
Muted Prose chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
So short, yet so amazingly true. I have a friend.. who's exactly like that. I can see through the "mask", I guess. Keep writing! MP
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
I like the theme here, very nice. Just check "my", should it be "may"?
Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
wow, I really like this.
Pillow Biter chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
Perfect as is, I love how you bring into light how our masks no longer serve purpose in private.
Th-forgotten chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Nice work, but in the end it doesn't flow as well as it could... :Skeep it up dorien
Happiness's Deceit chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
TT: Angry monkeys may take TAKE OVER THE WORLD TOMORROW!

Kai: That was very true. Lots of connections can be made with this poem. Great work!