Reviews for Happiness
joquinz chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
i like the part where you go 'Something gives me a notebook's worth to ponder'. it relates to life. nice one!
alluringdarkness7809 chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
this is truely amazing I loved the whole flow of the poem :-) *Ammer*
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Like the structure of the lines, especially the last two. There's a beautiful, slightly sad sense of almost confusion in much of this poem that makes it very poignant.
Jupiter666 chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
I like it. Happiness if very confusing. I agree... now if only I could explain that as well as you...