Reviews for Marbles
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
truly amazing imagery, it's quite frightening in places, making this poem very effective, i love the lines "This mind / This head" very well written x weasel within x
Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
it's very powerfull andjust scary. i like the honesty and keep writing :D
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
Ah David, sometimes I just want to ring these fiction gals and duds by the neck. They're not even up to your standard of talent, I must say. Love, pretty soon fictionpress will have a limit of 10... so you'll just have to make a new account LOL I'm kidding, damn you should just tell me to fuck off half of the time.

I have been reading some of your new-ish stuff lately - it's improvement but same ol' ;) haha I love ya. I really do think you can go somewhere with your song writing, so keep at it.

Jenna xoxo

happy belated birthday *muah*
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Ok, wow, that's scary. You write really powerful poems; it's great.