Reviews for You Can't Cheat Death, but you can try
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 3 . 7/15/2005
Thank you for answering my questions and I'm sorry about what happened with you and the real Mitch. Good luck on being a senior and whenever you next update- I promise to keep reading. Luv Kaitx
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 2 . 7/7/2005
This chapter was better. Still odd mistakes- it might help to get a beta(at least that's what everyone keeps telling me to do. Lol) So I understand how why you write something you can get so involved with the story and characters it is easy to forget the other stuff. Plot wise this is cool. It is good the direction you are talking Mitch. Most people either make him pure evil or neutural but you really have a good balance. While he feels for the girl, he is still pretty selfish and heartless to other people too. Which I find interesting. But does he really care about her for who she is or just desire her? Little questions I was hoping you could clear up(please.) Why didn't the police get called after Mitch stabbed Mike? Where does Mitch have the money to get his clothes, etc? Does he get paid or is it just magic? Sake's sister is a evil cow. Could she be any more insensitive? I'm thinking no. You put thoughts in italic at the beginning but then forget to carry it on at the end. Anyway, I want to read more of this. Wondering if Sake might fall prey to death eventually away as it's her time. Plus the title makes me wonder. Hope you add more chapters so I can see where this ends up. Luv Kaitx
Scratchfury - again chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
too lazy for a signed review - I was right to put you on author alert. Plot's getting more complicated. I like. Not that many people go to my site - but I'll have my friend favorite this - maybe you will get more reviews...
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
I never knew death was so compassionate! Mitch is breaking sterotype here. Seriously, though he is a fancinating character to read about and I'm guessing to write about too. Can death fall in love? Because he seems to be doing. Odd spelling mistake but the plot is cool and I will be reading more when you next update. Luv Kaitx
mitch chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
If I was really the reaper all I'd do is listen to the Blue Oyster Cult. PSHA!$!%?#%%
scratchfury chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Great story - slow down though. Lots of typos. Im going to guess that in the first few paragraphs everytime you said stick you meant sticky. Good luck - and i do hope you keep the updating speed high