theflowerinyourhair chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
a little hard to get into.. but i loved your description of crushing life between your fingers and feeling bad for it..and so on and so was a nice read. :)-mir.
Poetic Tragedy chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
I think I liked it, I especially liked the part with the bug, I really liked that part. It made sense.
Exiled-Knight chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Great poem. Nice look on life, pain, pleasure, and the minuteness of everything.

Midnight Lynx chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
WOW! You have no idea how amazing this is,well you might but this is just so...Honestly there are no words I could give to express how wonderfully amazing and stunning and astonishing This really is! I'm really impressed. WOW! Midnight Lynx
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
So true, at the end. Very emotive, great poem.