Reviews for GoodBye
fairEtales chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Amazing job! LOVE the metaphors! BEAUtiful!
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Sad. Scary though too. Like you can lose control to your self. Wow...
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
Wow, how many times in my life have I written poems like this? I can't remember, there's so many. This poem is extremely powerful and I feel that it's shortness adds to it effectiveness.

Write on!

Timothy Hazelo chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
Thats really sad! OMG seperating from yourself, omg, I can't imagine how that feels!