So, you just did that whole thing to my story because I gave you a NICE review. wow, usually it comes fromteh bad. If you hadn't read already, I already had some critiquing ( I hope that's how you spell it) of that sort of stuff. All of it was covered. Yes, it is allowed to advertise from a certain site. ask ladako. She's on the site. Yes, I need to explain more. But I've had ppl tell me that already. I don't need a thousand ppl doing that. I've had MisanthropeXeta do that, but atleast when she has something to say, she actually critiques me when I do it instead of throwing in my face. A true writer doesn't do that. So I think here is what you were wanting me to say in that review.

Thats sad...Anyway, Nicely done, the tune of the poem is good! It sounds at first like one of those cheerfull poems...But then...Yeah!

Everything in this poem is rushed. It adds a feverous mood to the poem, which aids the action of the poem, and makes the entire thing more powerful. Nicely done.

...Wow...Haunting and the ending was a shock. Congradulations on an excellent piece!

I love this poem. I love theatre and am absossed with it. No errors and it makes sense. plz write more.