Reviews for Breathe Breathe Breathe
A Phantom Stranger chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
wow...impressive at the least...I am getting like a stream of consciousness feel from it which is awesome works so well in this case...I will continue to read :)
llivia chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Very interesting poem, i love the way you've written itthanks for reviewing my work :) *HUGS*-L
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
Really conveys the sense of panic, and trying to convince yourself of something. Good stuff.
McLane chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
it's defenitely good as something. The panicky feeling of it really conveys. Good job.