Reviews for Smile Through the Tears
Saeger chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
That' something that happens too often. We shouldn't box up what we feel, we shouldin't hide behind masks. AFter too long, it becomes habitual and you lose who you really are... But beautiful job. Short, but expressive.
Gonzovalies chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Imprisoned by tears and wrapped in a smile... that's the package called emotions that we all try to hide... Your poem is very short and yet so meaningfully sweet... good going...
pennaroyaltea chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
whoa i can totally relate to this poem! i feel like i know exsactly what you were thinking when you wrote the poem. ive tried to write poems about this topic, like having to pretend your happy when you are actually depressed, but so far i just havnt been able to capture it. you did a really good job at getting the idea past without going into it to much and dragging it out. keep up the good work!-royal
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
I know the feeling...it's hard to smile tho. Nice job!