|Reviews for Dark of The Moon|
| Spinx chapter 3 . 5/16/2009
I love the smooth humor here.
| Sky Pen chapter 2 . 4/23/2007
Another lonely character that seeks solace in her art adn half done sketches, she seems to be the daydreaming type that is lovesick adn longing for this mysterious someone. It is definetly some sort of magical yet seductive feeling you've cast out here for the reader, I'm really curious to what MArgot wants and what she's waitingn for.
She seems to teh be perfect person to start this story out with, I wonder...
Well, I'll review tommorrow! Bye!
| Sky Pen chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Hm, another supernaturel one, I see that must be one of your preferences for writing.
Once again, you opened teh sequence with a nice flowing prolouge/poem which brings the readers into the story wiht the sense of magic and things to come in your beutiful lauguage. yOU have a great gift for poems, I like how you put this quote:
"Do not frightened
Do not be scared
I only ask for love
For it is a blessed reward for the likes of the undead."
That was beutiful, it also realted to your other story called 'A demon is not a devil" or something like that. I liked how you sort of made it seem like the poem was asking to lure someone into the story.
It makes me feel like I'm the one being sort of capitbated by the hunter and being crept into his lair. Very errie. Nice work.
| Cashews chapter 5 . 6/24/2005
I really love this story. It's my favorite among the others. But don't take it as a sign that I think your other stories pale in comparison but this just grabs my attention Spotted very few typos in this chapter, meaning you're getting better at proofreading!XD I like how the story's unfolding and how excited I get after reading every chapter. Another great chapter from you and I'm really at the edge of my seat, anticipating the next. No Hopefully, you'll get more ideas and inspiration when you finish reading 'Dracula'.XD
| Nic chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Hi there! Just dropping by from another blog :). Great story, can't wait to see how it unfolds. Judging from the introductory poem, it looks like its going to be an interesting ride
| battousai24 chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
great... i love it.
| Cashews chapter 4 . 6/3/2005
It's not crappy, you delirious water chestnut. Sure Gestalt mentions Margot's name a bit too often and their conversations seems a bit off but you made up for it by adding elements of mystery to it! Yeah, I love the vial I thought you were gonna use Raymond not Raimon. Are you still gonna use that plot twist? XD
Wonder what's gonna happen. I've got ideas but go on with your story. Haha, I'm liking it even more. XD
More and longer chapters! Go chestnut! XP
| Cashews chapter 3 . 6/3/2005
Gestalt aye? The name's pretty familiar...Wonder where I heard it from. XP
Yay! The plot's shaping up!XD And that characters are getting to be really interesting, especially Gestalt. Can't wait to know more about him and the rest of
That was a good chapter. May I say, you have the ability most authors don't have. The ability to keep the spark of interest alive and growing in your readers. Believe me as well as the others who say you're a good writer. I hope you don't question me on
I'll try and not make this sound too much like fan mail. Can I help it if I adore your work? Hopefully not, but would you rather me flaming you? Haha, just kidding. XP
Apart from the usual grammatical errors, run-ons, occasional shifts in tenses and typos, I couldn't really find anything wrong with how you wrote the story (I like your writing style so no worries there).XD
Man, I feel like I'm this old English teacher for noticing those. Oh well, as long as it helps. Who am I to complain? XD
Write more alright? And soon!XD
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Moving poem,the thing I love about it is how you put together a poem that replicates how a dead spirited one feels about being unloved and afraid by many live ones.:)
| Cashews chapter 2 . 6/1/2005
Argh, I'm sorry about my last review. It got cut off. I was supposed to say that it was too The same goes for this chapter as well. C'mon, make me and all your other fans happy and make your chapters longer!XD Oh well, if you can't do that, just be sure this won't be a short one. Make it a novel! Now, that's an
This is something new, I mean, you never written anything yuri (not that I know of). That's a good thing by the way. Go ahead and broaden your horizons. I'll be here waiting and reviewing your
Before this, I thought the only yuri fics I'd be reading and actually enjoying were Haruka/Michiru ones, but you changed that. I need a break from all the yaoi I've been
This is wonderful, you're getting to be really good. *pinches chestnuts' cheeks* Haha, you love leaving us hanging, don't you? You just have to deal with me if ever you don't want to continue with this one. *evil grin*
| Cashews chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Now that's what I call a great intro! Just by that I can tell this is gonna be something to look forward
I've noticed something, you're getting better with your You really are one talented panda. So let me have the bragging rights on being the one able to win in Solitare okay?
I love this poem of yours. Simple as that. But I don't think you can settle for that reason I love it because it pokes gently at me and that makes it interesting. I can't explain it really. There's just something about it that catches my eye and I can't stop reading until the
That was too sho