happy ending yay :)))

wow, what a way to meet a guy, eh? out of all the things you could do, ran over his dog is the last thing on my mind. It's original & sweet~

oh, brava on the ending :-)

lol i like how original this story is...especially in the way they met. :D i had fun reading this.

Sweet ending. You had me worried that it would be another one of those sad ending stories cuz he just ups and leaves. I mean how many people would give up all that for someone? I'm happy he did cuz I hate it when these stories end that way.

aw...

the ending is so cute :)

haha...thank you for such a cool story:)

this is such a cute story so far! I'm guessing there's something behind his no-cops attitude? hm...

anyway, I like it, but the color changing eye thing REALLY annoys me haha. like, what, is are his irises made of mood-ring fluid or something?

yes puppy dog eyes are very dangerous, i agree. aww it can't be the end, but so cute of an ending, though kinda generic, but nonetheless its been a great story

evilly sincere

squeel!This is so cute!

adorable story!

Congrats on finally finishing! I was so shocked to see the alert in my inbox! After all this time...

Great end though, i think you wrote it well. keep up the good work!

-grins- Now THAT was just adorable.

And...do us Brits really sound like that?

-laughs- I have to start calling people 'wally' from now on, then instead of 'plonker' or 'idiot'

I loved it - especially because it involved dogs - my dad's family used to breed dogs -sighs wistfully- if only we had the land now...

XD We have a twelve year old English Black and White Pointer called Karla - the poor darling is on her last legs but she's still as playful and energetic as a puppy...

I'm definately favouriting this, and I'll check some of your other stuff out later...hmm, today (Wow, it's half one in the morning...)!

L

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Wow, wow, wow! This was so totally awesome. I love the way you sucked me into this story from the beginning right until the end. And the way you made the caracters come alive. thanks for writing. *~* kay

This was an awesome story. I loved it! But I did cry a lot and laugh and that's a good thing I love stories that do that they are fun to read anyways it was so awesome I don't think I'll ever forget this story. So good job with it! It was wonderful!

~Raven

I don't like Kim.

I loved this story from start to end. You didn't add any random, unnecessary scenes just to extend it, your grammar and spelling is great, and plot itself was very original.

I must say, though...I'm very glad I found this AFTER it was completed because it would have driven me insane to wait for you to finish. Of course, I can't complain because I tend to take my sweet time with my own stories...

R.I.P Saber.

Thanks for a great read!

- Rebekah

wow. I feel bad. i had forgotten about this. Until I started to read the first chapter again and all that deja vu made everything come crawling back. This was a great ending. I really liked it. Glad you finished it. That's a feat to feel all sorts of proud over.

~Mel