Reviews for Summer Daze
TrenchCoatKid chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Crying right now... amazing.
summerdazed chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
oh my good u wrote something about my pen-name too! only mine has a 'd' in the end. _ anyway, this piece flows so smoothly it's like a clear spring on a summer's day. beautiful.

review me if you're free!

no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Nice rhythm and rhyme in this piece. It keeps the poem flowing along smoothly. And the couplet at the end is a nice final statement. Good work. Keep writing! :)
myfathersdaughter chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Beautiful. The first stanza is so true. Great work.
jaepoe chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
whatsapenname chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
SHWHOA! that was really really good.i liked that A LOT! wow. just wow.

Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
Nice flow and rhyme. I can relate to this, these feelings to reminisce.
damagedlittlefuckers chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
well-written. i enjoyed this.
Gypsee chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
wow that was so sweet. i reaaly loved iti added you to my favs
gooey chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Wow this is really good. i love the way it rhymes and everything seems to fit in so perfectly! great job!

method acting chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
Sweet topic, great how you wrote this for someone you know. When I do that it always ends up being weird. But I definatly love it, the rhyming is great. Wonderful job. THanks for the reivew. :)
sireslayer chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
wow that was amazing. great flow
Relayer chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
Lovely, it all works so well.
Grey Eyed Oblivion chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
I thought you didn't like him. Shows how stupid I am, lol. Anyways, awesome poem, I loved it. I totally LOVE the line "...that melted with long summer days..." Beautiful imagery I got from it. Good Job!
Kat-Renee Kittel chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
Oh I love this, the way it moves so quickly, until you get to the end and read the parenthesis. The rhythm matches the theme so well.

And very meaningful... -Kat
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