Reviews for Hiding
My Tears Don't Fall chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
good poem with strong emotion. great job. write more

Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
The last line feels too long to me, like it should be spread across two. But that 's just me. Otherwise, this is a very good poem that really expresses the pain of people not noticing when you're hurting.