|Reviews for Goodbye|
| N. Browne chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
Aw I liked the rhyming but this is just so sad! lol. -NB
| Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
good use of rhyme; it's hard for some to use it without sounding too cliched. other then that i think it's really cool how your poems are short but really get their message and emotions shown in just a few stanzas. take care.