|Reviews for Apology|
| bjw chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
Good effort with the rhyming!:) Although some parts are a tad awkward like "I need to not drown". But on the overall, it's a nice honest poem; the struggle in it and its emotions come across very clearly to readers. Keep it up!
| The Love Demi Goddess chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
I could feel the emotion in it. Parts of it didn't flow well, but it's understandable. Poems like this just fly to the brain.
I'm sorry to hear about your friends, I'm sure things will get better in time :)
Good luck! Keep writing.
write hard, write long,write until dawn TLDG
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
i know these feelings. ur capturing exactly what i feel a lot of the times. its like youre taking them out of my head, thoughts i mean. yeah! awesome job!
| Shadowed Mind chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
this was amazing, everything you wrote seemed so real, i loved it, i really did. definitely going on faves. keep writing, and never lose help, ever. all my love, shadowed mind
| SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
This is so beautiful. So much emotion in there. I can relate to this so well! QueenVixta
| DistortedClarity11 chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
I know how you feel, so I won't tell you it will get better. Just hang in there. Great poem.
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Oh God what a deep and satisfying poem for me. Pammy, I can tell that was written with do you have an e-mail address so I can get back to you?:)
| incandescent.smiles chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
ooh, I like it a lot! If you put "Leila" instead of Pammy in there, it would fit me PERFECTLY. I really really like it! Especially the beginning... the first ten lines. I love it! (yes, I know, I keep repeating myself. But I got less than four hours of sleep last night... hehe). Anywho, it would go on my faves... but alas, the idiot server doesn't let you have more than 50 fave poems... gr. I know! I'll make it my pick for this week! *ahem* yeah, anyway, ttyl, BYE!
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
aw pammy, *huggles* I no how u feel. We all go through this at some stage, but don't worry, your friends and ur reviewers will be here 4 u. Great work, keep it -apprentice
| lexy chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
Im tempted to yell at you but u alreadii guessed that i would- it's good but - Brighten up-! of i'll kill you (pleasant aren't i?)
| Winter Reflections chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
angst...always angst. anyway, it was well written and a good read.
*Smile, Cheer up and Open Your Heart*
| Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Oh my god! I can relate to this soo much its scary! I liked this poem and you are great at putting complicated emotions into words! Keep on writing! Eliza
| sirkupo chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
I love this poem... It's so sad... remorseful... and... all around well written. you have quite a gift, and you use it well Great job Pammy.. Kupo
| account not in use chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
I didn't mean to be me-love that line. Great poem, I awesomely relate to it.