Reviews for Comparisson of trhe Heart
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
i didnt enjoy this one as much. im not sure why, its still good tho. i dunno, smthg bout it... i dunno. ignore me!
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
Beautiful imagery in this. I really enjoyed, such a lovely tone to it. Your peoms keep getting better! QueenVixta
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
I really like the third stanza, the one with the heart. It's very sweet and special. Great job!

Much love, Rosanna.
bayshel-wass chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Wow...very deep, sorrowful, beautiful imagery. It carries your emotions across very well. I especially liked the line "an inner lake of tears." Very creative.