Reviews for Havoc of the Heart
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
Lovely rhyming darling. A very nice short poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
nice rhyming in this one. it just flows smoothly
Lee-Ann Kace chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
I really like this because it makes me think of how weak we are but just when we feel like God has abandoned us, He pulls us through and reminds us of His love for us. Whoa... okay. I didn't mean to go all deep, or whatever. But that's just what how it makes me feel.

Beautiful work.
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
Beautiful rhyming and a really good, moving piece. Amazing as always! QueenVixta
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
I like how you made this one rhyme, it's different. But very beautiful and definitely one of your better poems.

Much love, Rosanna.
bayshel-wass chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
I love the rhyme scheme in this poem; it flows very well. "Love breaks in twain" is a little awkward, but still makes sense.