|Reviews for Only In America|
| WiredWords chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
VERY clever last line. Nice angle on the money/ materialism issue. - you had a constant rhyme scheme in the beginning and suddenly it wasn't one anymore. It messed with the flow of the poem, in my opinion. '...a washed up fighter,/who's way past his prime' is a great description.
| Creepy McSteezerson chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
Very true, very realistic. i love how this was written, I really enjoyed it. Keep writing