|Reviews for about a girl|
| the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
lol i wrote a poem from my brother's perspective about how he'd feel after i died. it was pretty fucked up. but wait - all my poems are from my brother's perspective. HM. this is good. yes. "beer drinkers of the world unite! on the floor!" rock on dahlin
| Second Hand Screams chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
The ending's a bit too abrupt for me, but it IS from a guy's point of view :)
But I loved it. IT was great, descriptive and conflicting and everything. You had some ultra-awesome lines, and the rest were just plain awesome. Great job!
| account not in use chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
I love it! So amaziong! Heh, I was thinking of me in some parts, my boyfriend used some of those descriptions in letters to me. Anyway! Great job, amazing imagery, god I love it.
| in a jar pk chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
yes...it is supposed to be "scars." oops!
| xnvrmndx chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
I absolutely adored that poem. My gawd, it really captured me and everything about it was so moving. I love the format of it, and I love the way you described her. One thing I noticed though was "hide her cars with bracelets..."hehe shouldn't it be scars?But apart from that, I must say, it's 10/10