Reviews for Memories of the Beach
classic violet chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
Wow... It's so vivid. Very clear. This is a gem of a poem.
kuasso chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
i suppose this is what you mean by 'remiscient'? but it's a nice one. very quiet, very still, and (it rhymes, okay) very you.

and i know you! the name sounds familiar...
lalalalalla chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
don't you get tired recieving reviews from me? well...this one's good (as always) but don't you think...the "memory" thingys already overrated? my bad...anyways...keep it up...
Renada chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
This was good all in all, but I find one imposing problem; you use more words than neccasary. Trust me, I know. That's a problem I have at times. For instance, in your second stanza, first line, just say "Now, I sit at the top". Anyways, I think if those few adjustments are made it would be absolute perfection.

Ren
neath the willows chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
hav u ever thought about sumthin that just happened and thought that its already a memorie? gone in a flash... makes me sad... its why i live in the moment... this poem reminds me of that feeling. i like it! keep on keepin on!-BoB
elisani chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
hahaa, i cant be bothered to sign in. but anyways, this is such a nice poem! i love the imagery of the beach at night. i can just imagine myself there!