Hello,

I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Destiny Returns" and I wanted to reach out because it genuinely resonated with me. Your characters and the world you've created have so much potential for visual storytelling, and I'd love to explore the possibility of bringing your narrative to life as a visual comic.

Why I'm Reaching Out
I'm a passionate artist who specializes in adapting written works into visual comics, and your story stood out to me for its rich character development and the way you intricately weave emotion into every scene. The depth of your characters and the vivid imagery of their world have incredible potential for visual storytelling. I believe that with the right visual treatment, your story could connect with an even broader audience and create an immersive experience for your readers.

A Little About Me
My artist name is "ZoyeZest" and I have a deep appreciation for stories that resonate on a visual level. I've worked with various authors on a commission basis to turn their stories into comics that capture the essence of their narratives while adding a new dimension to the storytelling. My work is driven by a genuine passion for bringing stories to life visually, and I'm committed to making sure your vision is realized in a way that resonates with your audience.

Let's Chat
I'd love to discuss this idea with you further and hear your thoughts. Whether you're interested in a full adaptation or just want to explore the possibilities, I'm here to collaborate and ensure your vision is at the forefront of the project. As this would be commission work, I can also provide details on pricing and what the process would look like.

Looking forward to your thoughts, and thank you for considering this collaboration!

Best regards,
Baran
Discord : baran59354
Email: baran59354 gmail
Instagram: baran593544
Twitter: ZoyeZest

This is a fun and engaging story with a strong, relatable protagonist and a great balance of humor and action. The dialogue feels natural, and the world-building hints at a deeper lore that makes the reader want to know more!

ROFL Katie sounds just like you! *falls over laughing* Oh dear lord I could just see it. I would be Chloe screaming my head off and you would be Katie. *cackles* Oh dear lord I can picture it! Thanks for the good laugh. As you can see I'm in a better mood today. The teacher being eaten! HOW COULD YOU! AND THAT POOR LITTLE GIRL! *grumbles* Bad girl. You no kill little girls. And that poor teacher. *sniff sniff* Well keep up the great work! Ciao for now.

Kristi

lol. You know I love it hon. Great job! I like every inch of this chapter so :P. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for more!

Sorry hon but I'm too lazy to go back and review for each chapter. As you can tell I read the story... AND I TOTALLY LOVED IT! It was a bit dark but not too creepy. Seen worse. Well maybe if I had read it during a storm I would have thought differently. Any ways. Keep up the great work! This time... Don't wait that long again. Ciao for now.

Kristi

Good so far. Please update! Explain villain!

i love it when it's from different peoples point of views! it makes it really interesting

Yeah, sorry it took me so long to read this. But I did, finally. Its great I love it keep it up

Yeah, sometimes that sick emotion is love, Chloe. The demon puppet with the strings reminds me of Yura of the Hair in Inuyasha volume 1 of the manga I read. This is was nice, the action and thoughts were flowing smoothly.

i LIKE this story very much! ) hope to hear from you soon!

omg really interesting...keep it up and post soon! lol

Very cute chat between Katie and Daimen. I'll do some research on Black Blood Demons...I read about them and watched a Metal 20 movie on 'em.

so good. strange. but good keep it up!

Sweet, I'm gonna have to finish reading this story when I get on the net again. (lousy college computers). To your last review, NO you were NOT boring me! Ok for some reason this story seems like my life in a way. I LIKE IT!

If that demon had red blood, I'm gonna guess and say that there is a human soul within the demon. Keep writing!