Reviews for Optical Illusion
ryan chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
this one looked like it was going some where but it ended so shortly...if able try to make it a little longer...i think you can turn this into a great one...peace
youzi chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
very interestingly titled! i enjoyed this. keep writing D
Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Great poem! I like how you've kept it so short and clean.
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Cool poem, kinda abstract. Sad, too. But well written.