Reviews for Exhale
Baileygirl35 chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Whoa...I REALLY liked this poem for some reason! It stuck out to me in some way or another...not sure why. But I loved it. I wouldn't change I thing about it.
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
It's cool how the lines get longer at the end and then shorter moving towards 'exhale', like the poem swells up, too. Good emotion, as well.