Reviews for Breakdown
Misguided Youth chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
I know you wrote this before you met me but I want to you know that with all my heart and soul I want to make sure that you never feel alone again. I love you and do not want to be alone either.
ryan chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Hey long time no read any in a while...I really dont understand how you can feel so bad about things, you must have had some really bad experiences or you just injoy writing about things like this...I cant say I realy like this one but I see its not one of your favorites either...again its about pain and you "breaking down"...either way I injoyd reading it and hope to see more...from the all mighty from above saying I'm outie...peace..
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Deeply moving, emotive poem; great imagery, especially at the end. Very sad.
Furine Panpasu Kitsuchi chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
A great poem. I've felt that way too. Great way to express it. Loved it.