|Reviews for Break the Strings that Keep Me Alive|
| ryan chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
-_-...hey...you dont want to die and you know it...but the drown me in ur pee...just no...just never again...not kool not right...i dont know what to say about this one either
| Baileygirl35 chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
It's a nice poem...has a nice flow...
| Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Wow. Good poem, very morbid. Maybe I wouls've put 'Alive' on its own line, but that's just me. N I've just noticed how many poem's you've put up today...