Reviews for Break the Strings that Keep Me Alive
ryan chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
-_-...hey...you dont want to die and you know it...but the drown me in ur pee...just no...just never again...not kool not right...i dont know what to say about this one either
Baileygirl35 chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
It's a nice poem...has a nice flow...
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Wow. Good poem, very morbid. Maybe I wouls've put 'Alive' on its own line, but that's just me. N I've just noticed how many poem's you've put up today...