|Reviews for Light|
| ryan chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
i like it...but maybe there should be some connection between them that connectes them some how...its okay...kina short...but it makes me think...im thinking about this and its kinda...uhh how do i put it...its kinda dark...if you had light and something good but darkness some thing bad you know kinda intwine them both together it will make a a interesting poem...i give it 1 1/2 star...keep on writing dont ever stop...once again from the best of the best your favorite bud...ze man of all men...saying peace
| Baileygirl35 chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Erm...see, the reason I write happy-go-lucky pots-at-the-end-of-the-rainboe type of poems is because there's so many sad, depressed ones! Not that they're bad. I read them whenever I'm feeling down. But I like to put a happy side to poetry. But this is definitly a good poem. I liked it.
| thank you thoughtful chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
an interesting choice of style, yet still it somehow flows. i like this poem and its perfect length.