Reviews for Grandpa
speakeasy-love chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
...not like...understand, relate to...but at the same time...like. its strange
youzi chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
goodness. I don't know what to say to this piece. it sounds...horrible (what happened to er...you?)

P.s. thanks for all the reviews!For "laxative", i never used the word 'garnish'...it was 'garish' (an adjective itself and therefore incapable of being 'past-tensified'...or whatever you call it..yepps)

Do keep writing ! D
Yurishi chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
A lot of raw anger in the poem. Continue writing!

Mayumi