Reviews for Falling
Cursed-Destiny chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
This is really good, but the lines are really long, but other than that its goodthanks for the review
Baileygirl35 chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Hm...I had a hard time "following" it, I Guess you could say, but I liked it. Thanks for reviewing for me. And childish poems ARE my thing, so that's what I was striving for;)
youzi chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
the lines were really interesting. i liked 'No concept of time except that it is passing by' and 'a blurred oblivion where understanding needs to be seen to be acknowledged'...aome lines (i suspect you know which ones...) are kind of to long. i don't know. it may be a deliberate thing on your part? Do keep writing D

P.S. thanks for the review. I'll think about the suggestions you made!