Reviews for Promises
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
True! I agree with this poem. Well written.
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
this is pretty good. deep and touching. thanks for the review! great work

Sorrow
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
I like. Very true and really well written. Shame that promises are always made to be broken or at least all the ones I've been part of. Oh well thats life, great poem and I should shut up now! Keep up the good work! queenvixta
AllyCred chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
this is amazing...i think i have one or two people i would love to say something like this to...well done...so much emotion in ur words...i love it. lots of love AllyCred
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
thats so sad! aw its good tho, a good poem. short and to the point.
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
powerful and deep! great work!
Moonjava chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
I understand the words and the meaning of this. However, it I didn't think it flowed very well. Like the words just weren't strung together.
Mizu no Kokoro chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
hm... interesting poem rather powerful in its message Good job i liked the intensity
hellbentonruioningyourlife chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
shit,shit,shit,shit
Kakyou Takashiro chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
rather blunt... and a little lacking in the rythmn, even for free verse. expecting more next time.

kakyou

ps. "arcane devices (add)" tee. isn't ADD attention def. disorder? just noticed. of course. always enjoyable to read. i suppose.
Yuki of the Snow chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
this was pretty good. i liked the topic!
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
deep, personal and beautiful in so many words. lovely, I really deeply love it. beautiful work! keep it up!

!* noelle *!
dustytiger chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
wow, i like this a lot, the stuff you wrote reminds me so much of a friend i used to have, i really like the issues you brought up with this, great work, thank you for sharing
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Heartfelt and honest. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.