Reviews for for the limelight
GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Great imagery. I love the last part.
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
the format is decidedly spiffy; and the content even better. beautifulbeautifuljust so goddamnbeautiful. love it. -wallflower.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Makes me think initially of a spanish festival for some reason. Maybe the colours? 'she shoots up with glittery (watered-down) glue' - curious line. Very good job. It's refreshingly new.
wishingdreamingwaiting chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
awesome! i love the formatting to this poem.. it's all .. different and interesting. great job! _
clockwork kiss chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
oh, that was excellent! i LOVED the first to stanzas/lines(?, haha) and the "(though she wishes it were a different color)". very clever word play. this makes complete sense. i also love the way you formatted unadulterated. ha, great work.
shola chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
beautiful descriptions, and again the way you played with sound here is absolutely breathtaking
myno chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
amazing. need i say that i adore your poetry?
AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
and love is most definitely smile persephone. love this a lot, though i thought the formatting was a bit excessive in some parts -(pure,/un/adulter-ated)

seemed a little over the top for my taste, but oh well. i like it a lot all in all, just sometimes i prefer a piece without so much dramatic , just a preference. great piece.

Lucid Nonsense chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
I really liked this one, the formatting was well done as usual.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
beautiful as always. powerful and hauntig in tone. beautiful work!

!~* noelle *~!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
nice imagery - a great write!
lackluster chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
i love it! love the theme, and everything about it!
decayinglife chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
o, i like this nice job
thank you thoughtful chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
i love this. the style and the's all just ace.