Reviews for Aeternum vale
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
i really dont get the title but i do get the poem! so ill comment on the poem. srry i dont get the title, could be because i have no clue what a aeternum is.. poem was nice. raw and solid feelnigs that are well expressed. nicely done, i like you works!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
so sad...I was just speaking on death tonight with my family, that you go back and forth and want this person to have peace, yet are so distraught when they finally let go...speaks volumes, great and timeless piece.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
that confused me... liek you wanted them to go but missed htem once they were gone kidan thing, but i dunno the beginning seemed so insistent on having the person leave that the ending didnt makes sense to me
dustytiger chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
this is really good, it sent a shiver up my spine at the end, realyl well written, and what a story, great work, thank you for sharing