Reviews for Can You Hear Me?
lackluster chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
seems to me like songs are your poetry style. i like that. the repeating chorus just adds an effect that 'regular' poetry couldn't. great work!

~tuesday
putz-6 chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
This is an awsome song _
queenvixta chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
This so beautiful! I love it so much! Keep up the great songs! QueenVixta
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
this is sad and touching...has pain in it and the emotions are strong. I love the chorus and the flow.

~Sorrow~
MeAgAiNsTtHeMuZic44 chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
So sad, but beautifully written! Favorite stories list for sure!
Crimson Riley chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
This is so tragically pleading. It's so broken and so perfect.
dustytiger chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
this is really good, and i can relate to feeling this way, i'm moving past it but some days, i feel exactly like that, great work, thank you for sharing
Rachel Gattina chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Wow, this is very good! I love it! Keep writing poetry like this! It's awesome! I'm adding it to my favorites!