Reviews for Racist
Sanya chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
yay! that was a well nyc piece! :D its nyc 2 know ur agenst racism! :D
Ballerina with a Gun chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
Good to see you believe in the equality of people - good job! And thanks once again for the review.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
powerful piece, extremely powerful in the truth the message holds. wonderful work! my reviews are long over due and I hope you can forgive me on that. ; the poems rhyme is excellant, though a tad forced but it doesn't deter from the awesomness of the piece. I was left with chills running down my arms afterwards! powerful, beautiful work! _ lovely!

!* noelle *!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
i like this. too many ppl are racist. for the longest time my 2 best friends were a) guys and b) black. and im saying that cause i am white. adn when wed go hang out together ppl would stare at us adn give us looks. those looks like wtf are u doing with them type of things. was the worst. so we stuck to staying at one of thiers apartments and was ok. but i mean, no one should have to get looks like that from anyone. and i know theres much worse than that out there for racism. is such a cruel thing. nice poem bout it! sorry im rambling
method acting chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
The rhyimg seemed really forced. BUt I agree wtih the topic. Not your best, but good.
youzi chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
This piece has an interesting, colloqial style which i'm sorry to say i can't quite figure out. Do keep writing D
catseyeview chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
I like the very real feel to this piece conversational...
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
very ture & ncie message
dustytiger chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
*clap* *clap* i like the mesage in this, it comes out loud and clear, thank you for sharing