Reviews for Playing House Series
Shyla chapter 33 . 1/28/2009
WoW! The best yet! I actully laughed out loud at some points in this on their way to his dads.

Of course I am totally pleased he finally SAW her! I was waiting for that to happen and it was perfect. The scene was so real and so believable it gave me goosebumps and brought back memories of my first love...ah!

Keep up the good work. The charachters are developing nicely and are gaining more depth and I am anxious to see how Adrienne will grow and mature.
Shyla chapter 10 . 1/28/2009
Ok I reviewed earlier and wrote how I think the principal is unrealistic and Heather would never be permitted in the conversation. I've come up with a suggestion...what if Heather finds out about the pregnancy somehow (she overhears the nurse...or something) and is the one to first tell the principal to try to get back at Johnny and Adreienne...then she would be able to be in the room and it would be just like her character to do that.

That's all for now except I love this story...there are soem kinks but it is exciting adn the further the story goes the more you understand the characters motivations.
HiddenRoses.BlankPages chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Just to let you know I LOVE this story. I like all of yours but this one is my favorite. Update soon please.
anna chapter 34 . 1/11/2009
Hero child of Leonato chapter 33 . 1/10/2009
Wow I love this story it is so good. Please please update ASAP ! I wish i had your skill when it comes to writing, thank you so much for writing this story please update ASAP.
Nerdette chapter 34 . 12/27/2008
Good stuff.
angeleyes chapter 34 . 12/25/2008
i love this story. I find the story cool. I hope you finish it because it is a really great story.
Mystery girl90 chapter 34 . 12/21/2008
please please update soon.. i want to read more.. i've been a fan of this story for a long time... please update soon...
1 800 vampire chapter 34 . 12/12/2008
when will the next chapie be up
1 800 vampire chapter 33 . 12/12/2008
oh y fucking god. shit! yay!
1 800 vampire chapter 32 . 12/12/2008
aw that was so cute with the sweater
1 800 vampire chapter 31 . 12/11/2008
hm. heather still planned to fuck him? that's just wierd!
1 800 vampire chapter 30 . 12/10/2008
that was a cute ending. good chappie
1 800 vampire chapter 29 . 12/9/2008
1 800 vampire chapter 28 . 12/9/2008
twas good. very good.
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