Reviews for Playing House Series |
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![]() ![]() WoW! The best yet! I actully laughed out loud at some points in this on their way to his dads. Of course I am totally pleased he finally SAW her! I was waiting for that to happen and it was perfect. The scene was so real and so believable it gave me goosebumps and brought back memories of my first love...ah! Keep up the good work. The charachters are developing nicely and are gaining more depth and I am anxious to see how Adrienne will grow and mature. |
![]() ![]() Ok I reviewed earlier and wrote how I think the principal is unrealistic and Heather would never be permitted in the conversation. I've come up with a suggestion...what if Heather finds out about the pregnancy somehow (she overhears the nurse...or something) and is the one to first tell the principal to try to get back at Johnny and Adreienne...then she would be able to be in the room and it would be just like her character to do that. That's all for now except I love this story...there are soem kinks but it is exciting adn the further the story goes the more you understand the characters motivations. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just to let you know I LOVE this story. I like all of yours but this one is my favorite. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I love this story it is so good. Please please update ASAP ! I wish i had your skill when it comes to writing, thank you so much for writing this story please update ASAP. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good stuff. |
![]() ![]() i love this story. I find the story cool. I hope you finish it because it is a really great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please please update soon.. i want to read more.. i've been a fan of this story for a long time... please update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() when will the next chapie be up |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh y fucking god. shit! yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw that was so cute with the sweater |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm. heather still planned to fuck him? that's just wierd! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was a cute ending. good chappie |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw |
![]() ![]() ![]() twas good. very good. |