i haven't read that much yet but so far i love it! you are an excellent writer and have publish worthy material. this story is realistic and not extremely dramatic or anything yet it holds attention. Wonderful!

Hey, it's Andrew from fallingstarawards blogspot. I'd like to inform you that your story has been reviewed on our blog. I know you're inactive so I don't expect too much of a response :)

Are you not conyinuing?

i love this is there more?

haha yes.

i love this

lol.. whe you read a story and yournames in it... xD

interesting

This sounds so interesting...almost kinda like the TV series Awkward perhaps?

My gosh, you must update! I've been reading this forever, and it might be the only decent story I've found that deals with teenage pregnancy. :) Love!

I've been reading this for a while, trying to finish it. I noticed how in this chapter you mentioned something that I HAD to review on. Your character Johnny said that his name sounded like a name of some greaser from the 50's. I find this amusing, have you read 'The Outsiders'? That's what I thought when I heard this line.

One thing about the last chapter was though that Adrienne was afraid to show her body to Johnny despite the several make out sections they had before and in the very first chapter of Book II you already had her in shorts and a top so that kind of came out of nowhere.

Your story is pretty good. Maybe with some rough edges here and there (specially in some rushness feeling of certain storylines, grammar mistakes and some sudden changes of tenses) but the story is very good and you've managed to flesh out the two main characters quite well and make them engaging.

I feel too bad you abandoned this fantastic work more than two years ago (and precisely with two cliffhangers) but, if you ever come back, please know that you'll have an avid reader waiting for more of your story here.

this is a cool story are you going to finish it.

Wow. This story is intense at some moments. . I'll be on the edge of my seat waiting for an update.