This is really good in my opinion. Teen pregnancy is a reality. And no matter how much other people may look at it, this stuff happens in real life. In Book 1, Adrie is obviously still immature, young and sheltered. I kinda want to skip reading the part where she obviously is pregnant but can't acknowledge it and keep on with her self-denial. It was too infuriating, I want to shake her to grow up. But I have to admit that at her age, being brought up the way she was, having been sheltered all her life, it is probable that a teen/kid would react like that. I won't question why she let things happen that night at the party, she is naive, "in love", insecure of her sister, she wanted affirmation that she matters plus the words spoken by Johnny shook her resolve. So I believe it could actually happen and is happening in real life. Keeping the child and actually raising it themselves is one way to handle the situation, they could have opt for adoption and chase their dreams and personally I don't find anything wrong with that if they chose to do it that way (as long as they found the right people). But their decision is neither wrong. Either ways, they'd have to make sacrifices, both have pros and cons. Their decision is influenced by their experiences and as much as I want Johnny to go to Harvard, they don't have the financial independence to do that. Johnny is quite a guy, is there really someone like him? hehe. Despite his emotional baggage, he grew up being such a responsible person except for that fateful night which is really out of his hands since he was under the influence although still that doesn't make his action that night right in any way. But the way he took responsibility of his action makes him an admirable man in my eyes. The end part of Book 1, Adrie is starting to grow up. That's why I love reading Book 2 because the maturity in both characters is evident and I love how perceptive they've become. Anyways, I love the story and all the drama. It's been 10 months since you last updated and I'm really hoping that you won't abandon this. It's a great read and you haven't even really touched the romantic part of the story which I fully I believe will be revealed later on and I really can't wait or rather I can as long as you update, please...thank you.

ok i just got done reading all of it, i love it and you are spectacular you have to give me a few pointers you're great, no wait, awsome, no wait AH-MAZING overall

are you going to write more. when you do email me at . can't wait!

I love it so much. The characters have developed a lot and have matured in their adverse circumstances. It has all been written well with minimal Brilliant overall.

I assume that their relationship will eventually develop romantically..?

Are you continuing this? Please get back to me.

the story is very meaningful, at least to me cause it gave me a view of the reality of teen pregnancies. even tho its not the main theme of ur story.

life is harsh and u reflected that in this story.

interesting characters and unexpected plot kept me glued to my computer.

hope u will update soon.

THIS IS THE WORST STORY I HAVE EVEN EVER READ. YOU SHOULD LEARN HOW TO WRITE. I CANNOT BELIEVE THIS MADE IT PAST THE FILTERS. HOW IT SUCKS! WORDS CANNOT EVEN DESCRIBE MY DISGUST WITH THIS STORY. THE GIRL LOST HER VIRGINITY BEFORE SHE WAS EVEN MARRIED. THAT IS DESPICABLE. I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU WOULD PORTRAY CASUAL SEX IN SUCH AN ACCEPTABLE MANNER. DON'T YOU CONSIDER THE SENSIBILITIES OF OTHER HUMANS WHEN YOU WRITE FILTH LIKE THIS? DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I WANT TO GO VOMIT, OR CURL UP IN A CORNER AND DIE RIGHT NOW? DO YOU REALIZE THAT ALL I REALLY WANT TO DO RIGHT NOW IS BASH MY HEAD ON MY KEYBOARD UNTIL MY BRAINS SLIDE FROM MY SKULL AND MY GRANDMOTHER MISTAKES IT FOR HAMBURGER MEAT AND EATS IT FOR SUPPER? I CANNOT BELIEVE THAT NOBODY IN THIS CENTURY HAS NO MORALS. WITH THIS STORY I HAVE LOST FAITH IN HUMANITY. NO ONE HAS BEEN ABLE TO KEEP IN TUNE TO GOOD OLD-FASHIONED VALUES. NOT A SINGLE PERSON ON THIS FORSAKEN EARTH HAS DEIGNED TO SPEAK OF LOVE AND FRIENDSHIP WITHOUT A HUMOROUS REFERENCE TO RECREATIONAL DRUGS, WOODSTOCK AND THE SIXTIES. IT MAKES ME SICK AND IT IS NOT FUNNY. WHY THE HECK WOULD YOU WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS? IT BURNED MY CORNEAS. NOW I CANNOT SEE. I WILL HAVE TO GO TO MY EYE DOCTOR AND HAVE HIM CORRECT MY VISION. BECAUSE YOU RUINED IT, I AM REQUESTING THAT YOU PAY MY DOCTOR BILLS BECAUSE I DO NOT HAVE INSURANCE. THAT IS ANOTHER THING WRONG WITH THIS COUNTRY, THIS WORLD. HEALTH INSURANCE SUCKS. I CANNOT TELL YOU HOW MANY TIMES MY DRUNKARD FATHER HAS BROKEN HIS HIPS AND HAD TO GET SURGERY. HE'S IN THE HOSPITAL EVERY OTHER NIGHT. I SWEAR TO GOD. YOU MUST PUT GOOD OLD-FASHIONED VALUES INTO YOUR WRITINGS OR EVERY THIRTEEN-YEAR-OLD GIRL HAS THE IDEA THAT FORNICATING WITH HER OLDER BROTHER IS OKAY. THIS STORY IS THE MOST DISGUSTING, DEPRAVED, SICK THING I HAVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE. I HOPE YOU GO TO HELL FOR THIS. THAT IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY.

please write more email me at

can't wait i really loved it!

OMG i don't know what to say except that you are probably one of the best fictionpress writers out there! Everything comes out good plot,characters,although you have typos that can be easily fixed but the rest is excellent i just am sad because you haven't updated in a long time ! i have already read this story like 5 times !

great story so far!

This story stresses me out sometimes, can’t wait for the next chapter.

Yay... an update! Cant wait for more

OMG! What's gonna happen with this crazy lady?... u gotta update soon!

Oh. My. Freaking. Gosh. So i just read this whole story in a day and it's mindblowing. I wouldn't be surprised at all to see this novel on the shelves some day. Haha...i think this has inspired me in fact. Adrianne and Johnny are two of the most developed characters ive read in a FP story. I hope you update soon!

I love this story! :)

This is really good.!