Reviews for Playing House Series
Hidden Depths chapter 4 . 6/27/2005
really good. Still some mistakes, you should probably have someone else read it before you post, people tend to miss their own mistakes. Besides that though i like. Please update soon.
Sarah Elizabeth Julia chapter 4 . 6/27/2005
That was really good! Poor Adrienne. Write more soon.
BetweenLife chapter 4 . 6/27/2005
u have to update soon
Daydreamer-angel chapter 4 . 6/27/2005
must get rid of heather
Abby Sequioa chapter 3 . 6/13/2005
WRITE MORE! *holds wet noodle up threatenly* WRITE MORE!
kamma7292 chapter 3 . 6/12/2005
Aww that was a sweet chapter, he tought her how to swim! Did Jillie just not notice her friend wrapped around her brother? How old was Jonnhy here? I know, so many questions, please don't get overwhelmed, lol
Sarah Elizabeth Julia chapter 3 . 6/11/2005
Good update. I liked how Jillie and Johnny were sarcastic when they were fighting. That was funny. Write more!
Abby Sequioa chapter 2 . 6/11/2005
wow! this is really good! you really made your reader be captured into the story... I didn't even notice the grammer mistakes and stuff
sourgummyworms2007 chapter 2 . 6/4/2005
interesting. enjoyable.
Sarah Elizabeth Julia chapter 2 . 6/4/2005
I liked the background on Adrienne's and Jillie's friendship. Good chapter, write more soon.
kamma7292 chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
Great starting chapter, it was really good. I can't wait to see more, update soon!
yourevilsoul chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Hehehe.. it's a cute story lol! Continue PLZ!
Sarah Elizabeth Julia chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
This is good so far. Write more. Make sure you check your spelling and stuff though. Otherwise, great! Keep writing.
ink-sword chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
M, good!

I really like this, and think it could be very well developed.

Bit of CC, though:

Watch your punctuation, you seem to be missing a lot of it.

It isn't really interfering with my understanding the story, but it could get that way if not checked out.

Anyway, love the story, update soon!
KalinaGirl chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Wow - I really love this! Please, with cherries on top update soon! I like it alot!
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