|Reviews for The End|
| arianna chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
| Rachelle You Bitch chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
me gusta mucho!
submit this one. aren't you the avid fan of ellipses! ("...")
| Rakira9 chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
this is sad. you can feel the pain of abandonment in the worlds of your poem. the short lines say alot more than they look like they should. good job.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Funness. No I like the rhyming. Nice, but it doesn't seem your best.
| perdita's kiss chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
wow. that's all I can say. that's really good. I think I might have to start posting my poems and things because I can't keep a story going.
| Nicole chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
I really like it, whos it going out too?
| Eyes of Amethyst chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Love the rhyming scheme. A simple poem that touched me. Keep it up! )
~Eyes of Amethyst
| RedXfire chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Nice ending but hmm its a very mix still very awsome
| colorguardgeek chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
great poem I loved the rhyming bits.
| garage-door-opens chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
I can definitely relate.