Reviews for lamentations
GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Nice imagery. Nice use of the mythology, too. Once again, the structure works great.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
I love the formatting that graces your poems and this is no exception.
shola chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Even without your formatting here the imagery and word usage was fantastic. It's excellent to see you can let other attributes of your style take the lead in different pieces. Quality
hmmmmm chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
made me shaky. reminiscent of black coffee (even though you did mention it. oh well).
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
beautiful. just breathtakingly gorgeous! _

!~* noelle *~!
Amelia Grant chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
i like the unique formatting here; very good and interesting writing!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
awesome.. love the last line