|Reviews for Black and white|
| Silly4stains chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
I understand, and the poem is good too.
| Muted Prose chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
It's kind of like... Believing in yourself and knowing your abilities and strengths when others who don't know you only see what's on the outside. While you see a rainbow in yourself (which is good _), others see the plain old black and white. The greatest poems always come up when you least expect it ('specially 3 o' clock in the morning or when you're half-asleep). Great job! ~MP
| The Moribund Marionette chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
It actually is quite good, contrary to your mind's most holy and popular opinion. Don't put yourself down like that, even if it is jokingly. :) Live and in color, ~Writer of Darkness~
| Eyes of Amethyst chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
Short yet sweet. There's a deeper meaning despite the shortness of the poem. Keep writing! )
ps: I'm impressed you made a poem with lack of sleep. I did that once, but I lost the poem. But maybe being half-asleep while writing a poem is a good thing... You see things in a different light, and you imagine things you'd never think of when fully awake. But that's just me. Sorry for this boring lecture. )
~Eyes of Amethyst
| Unknown Unnamed chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
I like the choppiness. It gives it a really dramatic feeling. Sweetness.