Are you planning on revisiting this? I'd be really interested in seeing where it goes.

Aww this is such a cool story i need more... like now...

This story is fantastic! I can actually visual myself seeing the character and feel the way the character, Sarah, does. I can imagine everything single detail in my mind.

I must say, you write extremely well for a fourteen-year-old. Keep up the good work, and hope you write another chapter.

~Lady Akina

Excellent story! I think you're doing a wonderful job writing this! I'd love to see another chapter. :)

oh my gosh, you have a very good ability to write. i can't believe you are only 14. i love the way you describe things. the way you describe them is so perfect that i can see it all in my brain. i'm really liking Sarah's character especially her interesting relationship with her parents. it reminds me of my relationship with my parents. i really hope you continue with this story because i would be interested in reading it.