|Reviews for Dial Tone|
| eldrin chapter 14 . 8/17/2008
I've had a huge grin plastered on my face throughout this chapter. I was so happy to see see an update. _
This was an excellent follow up to the kissing in the last chapter, and the Kyle-punching scene is in particular pricelessly wonderful.
Excellent, excellent. I hope you don't take too long with the next update (though I'll still be around if you do).
| loudellipsis chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
I'm not sure if I've reviewed yet, so if I have I'm not stupid, just too lazy to check '
Great story, hope to see more soon! It's refreshing to see well written slash.
Also, Kyle SO had it coming.
| AlastrinaMeadow chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
What's going to happen? Update soon!
| Curb Crasher chapter 14 . 8/15/2008
Yes. That was a nice kissing scene. And now it's getting angsty! T_T
. . . Or, well, it's not angsty yet. But there's drama! And I'm worried!
| kazoua chapter 14 . 8/14/2008
I love the chapter!
| crystal balle chapter 14 . 8/13/2008
Ah, this is awesome!
| Nova laVie chapter 14 . 8/13/2008
oh my goodness that was great, i wan't sure if this would be ever updated and that was sad for me cause it's one of my very faves and one of the first stories i ever read on FP, i just love it
| Balliett chapter 14 . 8/13/2008
'Leave Your Porn at The Door. Thank you, signed, The Management.' I'm so going to quote that. (;
I simply adore all your characters. Especially Sam, who is incredibly adorable even without his "punkness", colored hair, and face bling. Punching Kyle was a nice touch, as if to say "fuck you, bitch". I giggled (a lot) when I read that part.
The DanielSam-ness is cute. It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. D
One thing that could use a little work is the detailing. Try to add a little more description into your writing. I'm sure it'll make it even more awesome than it already is. Anyway, great job with this chapter. Update soon.
| Addie chapter 14 . 8/13/2008
i love this story and use of vocab most stories have good plot but read like a shitty 5th grade text book. this story truly surpasses most others iv read. when do you update?
| Logical and serene megadeath chapter 14 . 8/11/2008
Shounen ai my antidrug...wait that's a lie. It's meh DRUG!
Anyway-this story always makes me laugh (in a good way).
_ Thanks for the happiness.
| comedyandtragedy-xiii chapter 14 . 8/9/2008
Gah, I love this story so much. It's seriously one of the best slash fics I've ever read.
The Same-punching-Kyle-in-the-face thing made me day. Tee hee. :D
Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Lee Jung chapter 14 . 8/9/2008
| WrittenSound chapter 14 . 8/8/2008
Aww... That totally sux... Stupid people and their homiphobe-ness! But, yeah, this is friggen awesome and u must continue or I shall beat you with a virtual frying pan all virtually and stuff. Oh! Awesome talk-y shall be in next chapter, YAYS! _ Update soon!
| Cattails chapter 14 . 8/8/2008
I have no idea what to think about Kyle. He's nuts. That's all I can say. Are maybe he's a genius? I just don't know! He confuses the hell outta me. Anyway... Pft, does Riley really think they're gonna get it on in the middle of class? I mean, that'd be hilarious, but highly doubtful :P Hm, Orchestra, eh? I think it has more to do with the Jazz Band thing. I love Miles. And the fact that he and Kyle are brothers. I was not expecting that. And finally Sam punches him! I'm surprised it took so long. Hm...does Kyle have a crush on Daniel, maybe? It's the only thing I can think of. Unless he has some twisted crush on Sam and hides it with hate... Wow, Katie just keeps appearing, doesn't she? And Indra's awesome. She's like a kooky older sister. Oh, a roof talk? Excellent XD Looking forward to it!
| Shalli chapter 14 . 8/8/2008
Hah, but I have not died from the suspense!
Anyways, I was beginning to think this story dead, but you have proved me wrong. Kudos and thank you! Kyle's motives confuse me, but am I right in thinking that /he/ wants to get with Daniel, and so has been setting Sam up to fail from the beginning? Or am I totally off target?