|Reviews for Dial Tone|
| Porn Yesterday chapter 5 . 8/11/2005
Poor Daniel, Sam can be so cruel sometimes...-.-; ((sighs)) Hehe, sorta' curious to know what made Daniel actually run all the way back to the Academy, for a second when I read wet streak and all; I thought Daniel had ended up falling in a pool or something like that...would've been awkward eh XP I'm glad things didn't go well between Daniel and Katie, only because well...she's...UH OH (!) XD The amusing thing about Sam and Daniel though, is the fact whenever they have a conversation, they amuse me very much so. Even though Sam WANTS Daniel to leave him alone, by the end of it...I just end up lurving the two of them even more! ((big grin)) When Sam wouldn't give Daniel a towel though...that wasn't nice of him... Next time, be nice Sam. If you don't...((pats spatula in hand)) Well, must I say more...? XB I can't wait for what happens next though!
Hmm, switching to technical mode momentarily. ((switches to technical mode)) ((POOF!)) From what I can see, no grammatical errors or anything of the sort. A nice, long chappie too, so happy about that. Sorry about that temporary death of yours though...welcome back to the living! ((shakes hand in warm welcome)) X3
Status: Impatiently Waiting
| comedyandtragedy-xiii chapter 5 . 8/11/2005
Love it. It's simply brilliant. Update soon. That's an order *Mock glares*
| Jeoal chapter 5 . 8/9/2005
I really am starting to love Daniel. I’m not quite sure why – I think it’s more like a lot of things combined that just make him such an interesting, loveable character. I adore his persistence with Sam (even though we don’t truly know a lot about him or his motives yet, do we?), his willingness to be nice to Sam and to do what he asks him to do (like…go on a date with Katie), his attitude – sort of upbeat and humorous – and really just everything about him. And I’ve always liked the name “Daniel”, too. :-)
I don’t think that I like Katie much, but I bet that was your intention. ;-) I can’t wait to see how she and Sam got hooked up in the beginning (if you have any plans to go into that?) because they just seem like opposites on so many levels. They make (made) a unique pair, that’s for sure.
I thought that you were going to go somewhere with that scene at the end – somewhere more “relationship”-wise, I guess I’m saying – but I’m glad that you didn’t. I don’t know if I mentioned that I liked your pacing so far? It seems like so many authors on here write in fast-forward; there’s no…sense of real-time, you know? And I understand that some things just happen quicker than others, but I really like this frame you’ve set. Sam and Daniel have just met, and they don’t know much about each other. They’re feeling each other out, as stuffy and analytical as that sounds! Haha, sorry about that. I guess I get carried away sometimes. ;-) And I wouldn’t expect them to just to gallivanting around as a couple, after the first few chapters.
Speaking of them not knowing much about each other – we, the readers, don’t really know much about them either. Or we do but not enough. Haha, definitely not enough. So I’m here waiting for you to update – I hope that you do soon because, as I already said, I’m hooked. I can’t wait. But I will. I certainly will.
(and before I go: I love that Sam uses “swell”. No one says that anymore. His mannerisms are so endearing.)
| theremaybeagodyahoo.com chapter 5 . 8/8/2005
sam needs to be nice to danny! he's such a cute character!
| Jarf chapter 5 . 8/8/2005
Hehe, I like where this is heading. :D
| orbicland chapter 5 . 8/8/2005
Oh gosh, yes. And you know what? I just love the way Daniel keeps on trying even though Sam's all like 'get the hell out of my face.' It reminds me why I love the fact I am literate and can read. And also think that band camp is funny, despite American Pie references.
| Esquirella chapter 5 . 8/8/2005
Ah ha! Daniel is making some (small) progress!
| Esquirella chapter 4 . 8/8/2005
*too busy cleaning up the coffee I spit out.*
| Esquirella chapter 3 . 8/8/2005
*laughing* that was very cool!
| Esquirella chapter 2 . 8/8/2005
I think this was a good, albeit short (LOL) chapter.
| Esquirella chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
This is a very start.
| AppLEaves chapter 5 . 8/8/2005
I admit... it WAS a bit ugly.
Uhh... wait... no. KATIE was ugly. I suppose she's one of those bimbos with bulging gross boobs and tops that look like bras with only a square inch of fabric added.
Bad mental image. REALLY bad.
I could understand why Daniel was all freaked out. I would've thrown a shoe at her, if I were him. But I'm not, so she's safe. (For now.)
And umm... can I have rice with the curry?
| rodeoclown chapter 4 . 7/28/2005
I'm so glad I stumbled on your stories! They are very refreshing and original and you write well. I'm not sure which one I like best now...the suspense at the end of this chapter is killing me though...please update!
P.S. My favorite line: "My nerves, which had been poking out of my skin and curling around at the ends, slipped back into place as I realized that Daniel was not going to leap out and attack me."
| Jarf chapter 4 . 7/26/2005
I hope you continue this soon. It's great so far. :D
| Jeoal chapter 4 . 7/19/2005
Another story from you that starts off on an interesting note and just runs with it. It’s great how Daniel and Sam began their acquaintance with a random number on a bathroom stall because it’s something that could honestly occur, and I think that people always wonder just what would happen if they did call one of those numbers [though there’s a low standard that seems to go along with that, I suppose]. I’m wondering now why Daniel’s number was up on the wall to begin with, so I hope that you continue this soon and get us even more hooked on the plot. I especially like the gradually turned-playful/sarcastic banter between the two guys, and the fact that Daniel just happened to show up at the camp right after they started to talk on the phone. Call that a predicament. I can’t wait to see what they get into.
I’d review all four chapters because you really deserve more reviews than you’re getting. But I think you’d get tired of me pretty quickly, so I’ll save you the pain of that. It’s absolutely fantastic, and I hope to see another chapter of this soon, as well [as I’d Rather Not]. [and by the way, this ‘new style’ of yours is awesome, so no worries. ;-)]