|Reviews for Plenary Notes|
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
'We live in fear of execution'
i dont know why, but that stood out to me, very different and true(not sure, but i am thinking)
clever, complicated and tried.
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
It's so long and unwinding that I found it hard to focus on where it was. Rather than a direct scene, it seems to be an idea or notion. A trail of thought, say.
'Questions and insightsWhere the men made speeches;and the women made coffeeIn the family living room,The neighborhood theater’s'
I liked this. Brought me back to the poem and invented more of a scene.
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
this is really good. i like the flow and the way you wrote this. It has a touching air to it and it touched me.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Such power possessed by these words, such rivulets of passion and loveliness. This is awesome. I am speechless.
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
very cool poem! "When I lower the bucket..." loved that line - one for my favs list - author as well!
| Munchin chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Wow.. that is amazing. astounding.. resonating.. beautiful.. Wow. I love your style. this is so wonderful. i love this style.