|Reviews for bloody valentine|
| method acting chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
I like this. Loads. I loev the formatting, the flow, the detail. Vocabulary. It's a flow, easy breezy, on a hot topic. Inadequate wording on my part, heavy topic. See, it's hard. But you went about it with easy, or so it seems by the flow. Lovely, really lovely.
| from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
Very strong images (cool but morbid). Great poem.
| poet tree chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
That is somehow astoundingly erotic. Wish I could write like you.
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
Amazing, indimidating and really breathtaking. Simply wonderful beyond words.
| 364 unbirthdays chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
you've got talent. very nice.
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
crimson abashed in the scentthat's a crazy line there, i love it, again another artfully depicted scene of gothic romanticism with more than a touch of tradegy
how's that for crazy sweet big words O.O
sorry, but for all honesty, its true, a very skillfully set up mood, muchly love this, beautifully done
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
awesome piece. dark, angsty, but wonderful imagery and diction. i like your use of metaphor as well. well written, great job. :) keep it up!
| breakdown in the waiting room chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
Excellent. I can't recall if I added you to my favourites list, but you're certainly added now. You are very concise in length and your imagery, especially including the various colours, is vivid and reinforces the scene and the powerful theme and ending line. Fabulously done.-jess
| account not in use chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
| shinco chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Whoa! That's freaky, dude! lol Very nice imagery, I liked this a lot! _
| Lady Oberon chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Wow...It's descriptive, yet vague enough to have undertones of something greater. Great Work. Honestly.
| emundee chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
| graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
especially like this one, good imagery!
| ShadowPharoh chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
wow. you are really talented! i just luvved it.
yea, and in reply to the review you gave me for "Her" i asked the girl out she said yes! we are once again a couple. lol. and i'm a girl as well, if you were wondering.
| dusk orchid chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
Tantalizing. I feel as if I'm in this swirl of emotion. Great use of parentheses. Somehow it just deepens the mood. Wonderful and bittersweet.