Reviews for Goddess of Waters
somerandomdude chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Nice imagery captured with few words. This is a good haiku. However I urge you not to write something like "review me, I review you" in your summary, it sounds like a cheap bargain, and it will turn many people off. People should review if only they want to.
Ygg chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Beautiful haiku about such a tragic event. Great work!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
An ageless beauty to this. I enjoy the alliteration.
Porcelain Spirit chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Interesting haiku. I like your fantasy style ]

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