|Reviews for lock and load|
| Morbid Maxwell chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
...oh...angsty...but again, much loved! I'm still sorry about your problems...just please don't do anything considered 'stupid' even if it's your pain reliver...I've gone through it too so...
| GirlNamedLiv chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
wow that was tense.
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
this is bloody fantastic...well done...simly amazing...the last few lines are so powerful and deep...i love it. lots of love AllyCred
| Moira Whiting chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Scarey and sad meaning, but well worded...
| Me chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Great job at setting the sceneGood luck for future writingMaybe one day it will be publishedI hope it is
| account not in use chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Wonderful langauge! You pulled me in with how tense but free everything is.