This is great, I love it! The characters so far seem awesome. Continue soon

wow. great beginning! i hate it when you have to remove all thats stuff on the airport; the alarms hate me. jordan's cool, and yes... please update!

I like it so far. Keep writing!

Hello. I enjoyed reading your other story (A beautfiul mistake - I think), and hope that this story exceeds my opinion of your writing (which is a good thing - I"m not being a bitch) as I"m sure it will. Keep up the good work, and if you wouldn't mind, could you check out my own story?

Thank you for taking the time to read

I like it! I think it'll turn out to be a great story! keep it up!

I like it! ] The "Adam and Eve" idea is very unique! I'm sure this'll get very interesting, and I can't wait to read more! Update soon!

WOW! I like this. Jordan is awsome and Evelyn is too. I can't wait till Evelyn meetes Adam. That'll be great. I'll watch out for the next chappie. I like this story.

~aquarius piscies~

Hah, I like it so far. Good strong beginning, like the humor. Want to learn more about this Adam kid, love Jordan.

~Aly

Cute story. Keep it up? :p

Here are my random thoughts from this chapter:

It does seem a good amount of different from A Beautiful Mistake.

I love the name Evelyn! Fell in love with that name while reading another fictionpress story- "The Waiting Room"

I couldn't help but think I have a completely different view on love then Evelyn does! I personally don't think you can help who you fall in love with, and you certainly can't choose. But yeah I'm sure her mind will be somewhat changed as this story runs it's course.

Also! ITALY? I LOVE ITALY! Man even the mention of Italy gets me all giddy. Have you ever been? I went a couple of years ago during my OAC year of highschool (I'm canadian) and I'm dying to go back. My favourite place was Capri, but I also loved Rome. We also went to Florence, Sorrento, and Pompei. SO yeah I'm really enthused about this story taking place in Italy.

Good job on the opening chapter and can't wait to read more :)

very good, I like I like. I pretty much grew up at O'Hare :) youve got good... well, word use? command of the english language i guess would be the way to phrase it, and keep things moving very well. the only thing I would suggest is perhaps make it a little more formal? questions posed to the reader always seems unncessary, those questions should come from the story and not have to be stated directly, you know? in my own little world, at least :) but yes, very good, keep updating and ill keep reading