Reviews for Red Lantern Road
samwise606 chapter 4 . 12/23/2005
Oops, my mistake. Last review, I thought it was Sarah who was murdered, didn't think about it being Holly! Like, Quicncy recognized the bracelet so I thought, "Maybe its a bracelet that Sarah wears a lot" or something. Well, I was wrong. Still pretty good, and I'm glad to see the modifications that we discussed have been made. And you used the bum bum bum thing at the end, hahaha. Good story, but the question of course if, who did it? I guess that will be revealed later.-Samwise
samwise606 chapter 3 . 12/21/2005
At first when I went to read this chapter I thought, "I'll finish it now because its only three chapters", but then I saw you had added the fourth one since the last time I was here. I'll read that one like, soon. But now for chapter 3, I see the action is starting to intensify, and the crime has been committed. I know this is probably supposd to be obvious and goes without saying, but just incase, the woman a the end was Sarah, right? Interesting, I had expected the victim to be Quincy and then Sarah would have to solve the mystery. Like you said in chapter one, the reader would have to guess who would be murdered by the end of the first book. Good job!-Samwise
samwise606 chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
Ah, very good. You and your character both like to leave readers in suspense! Good beginning, it definitely captures the reader's attention very well. I hope to read the next chapters soon!
DeadlySilent chapter 3 . 7/2/2005
I just read your story and I really do like your style. I like the humor that you have in it as well as the connection between Quincy and Sarah, it makes the story fun. Though I do have the feeling you just killed her... O.O